If it be your will - Ayden and Adele part 2

If it be your will - Ayden and Adele part 2

A Poem by ~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair




Ayden and Adele,


the story never  tells


how it  all ends.


 


The truth is hiding,


turning its gaze away.


 


He went to defend the


Kingdom, she begged him


to stay. ‘I cannot betray my King’


he answered.


 


Her gaze wandered


 to his eyes.


 


‘If it be your will’.


 


So she adjure him, 


come back to me!


 


Their love so strong,


bonded to each other.


 


They say, ‘We have seen


a wounded man’,  and the


other continues,  ‘He will remain


permanently on the battlefields’.


 


And she’s always looking for him,


always cries of grief,


whispering quietly,


If it be your will,


I follow you.




© 2016 ~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair


Author's Note

~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair
Thank you for inspiration John (Coyote Poetry), read it here:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Castellenas/1541029/

Ayden & Adele (part 1) here:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Arwen-Evenstar/828316/


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A beautiful journey in your words. I liked the gentle tone and the story in your poetry. You honored the ancient Poets with the beautiful words. Thank you Sarah for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair

8 Years Ago

Many thanks for lovely words. :) It took a little longer than I expected.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You did very well. Had the feel of the ancient writers. A outstanding poem.

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Added on June 9, 2015
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~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair
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