You and I.

We giggle and smile,

We run and we stay,

Until the sun sets,

At the end of the day.

We lay on the pavement,

And watch the stars,

Our hands are intwined,

Our hearts beat the same, hour, by hour.

Our smiles, don't fade,

Our happiness remains,

Until we depart, at thee end of the day.

Then we hug,

And say our farewells,

Until the next day.

Then once again,

Our hands will intwine,

And our hearts,

Become the same, just fine.

Author's Note

This I made during math class, so if it isn't the best, it was because I wasn't focused really.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Cool!! I really like it.

But just btw, you should change it to 'the', not 'thee'...

=)

[PaperHearts]

I liked the lightness of this piece! It was so carefree and full of happiness, which made me really enjoy reading it. I particularly liked the part about lying on the pavement and watching the stars, as these lines evoked a lot of memories for me! There were a couple spelling mistakes which you might want to check up on, but other than that, this was a really sweet poem!
~PaperHearts

[Marina]

Ahaha. You should write more during math class. This is a really wonderful poem.

Cut and upbeat. I love it!
Thankyou for sharing.

XxStaySweet,
Rina