Forgiveness

Sorry its word maybe not long but its mean A lot but really if we say it this mean we will get forgiveness ? think it ....

Sorry .....
       am sorry ..
     I come to you  and the heart pray for you remember good thing
So forgive be easy word on your tong
    
  by my hands i lost you and push you ...
And i forget you and make you forget me too
And i walk away in days your heart scream need me
Walk away in days tears was like Rain

Be away from you was my sin and i pay it back
and this sin by my bleeding heart i pay it back
And i come today just for show it

One word if you say it will make the sky have million moon
make me walk on water
But if this word so heavy on tong if this word not sweet any more

So this mean you judge on me by death

I was someone live in fog .. i was someone cant handle the missing
Leave you but the days and night punish me so well

i be someone lost his way ..and when the sun's life go away
start feel how you was my sun
so i come fast for tell you sorry

walk away was my mistake and this mistake i pay it back by my tears
i wait just one word if you not give me it
this mean you judge on me by death

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Author's Note

sometimes not good write but this what i think

Reviews

[Asem]

Thank you
i try do my best about Grammar sometimes not do good :) but i try tell what i feel and what i see
thank you again

[Rachelle]

Truth and sincerity in words sometimes go beyond grammar and syntax.

[Rachelle]

Truth and sincerity in words sometimes go beyond grammar and syntax.