Solitude hands

Solitude hands

A Poem by Ashdum

In the night I stand across the waves

In the shadows of misery and pain

Thinking about the rain

And the curse that held within

 

Now I'm in the presence of hate

Shall we say it was the pain

Or It was a temporary way

To erase the shame

 

As every leaf falls down

I see forgotten sands

Cover the depth of my hands

And start the see

The flow of emotions I have

 

If it was a tear within me

I shall shade to set my self free

Every grave I see

Is just another one telling me

What to believe

 

I just tried hard to believe

But time is a thief to see

That left me no way

To erase these tears

 

As the kiss of loneliness

Cursed me

And life still a leaf  

Within trees

 

I shall breath

And think to see

Within hails 

© 2010 Ashdum


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Thanks dear .

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, this is simply stunning my friend! I loved every stanza, beautifully written....well done! ~ Helena

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Ashdum
Ashdum

Amman, Jordan



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