i saw

i saw

A Poem by Ashley H
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this ones about people and myself just like all the others.

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the new lovers tears

over the worn lovers hysterics

the people who dont know

rolling their listless eyes

all over the room

the one who sits across

theyre friends

but he laughs the most

everybody walks

slower or faster

everybody

goes on talking

because thats what we do

and all of a sudden

im not hungry

© 2010 Ashley H


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Greatly put into words. Nice peice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like your style ! it's different but very good !

Posted 13 Years Ago


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love the phrases u turn in your work(:
clever & thoughtful. Unique.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 9, 2010
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