Mornings With Him

On my waist
nothing but lace
  hair and face
  in their natural states

Bound to these sheets
our tangled feet
  found underneath--
  unbrushed teeth

Reviews

[Stephen]

Ah! Lovely! You given me feels to fee the warmth breezes of love via words. May be, your addicted to lust because you know the real beauty of love and am sure, you enjoy it daily cus, it's seemed that lust's been a necessity of your life which means, you love dispersing your aromas around the world. Lovely poem, you've got a kind warm heart. The guy's so lucky who's got an opportunity to dance with you all the night, you made him immortal with your aromas, Ashley. Stay Blessed & Beautiful.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

For rhyme...I will say the pace seems forced...
but I believe you tried your best with the subject matter...
and used the wording to give the intent...
yet...this can be better...IMPO...write on...