Can you?

 

 

   Can you even hear me?

   Can you even see me?

 

               I am standing right here

                  do you even care?

 

                    I feel so unseen

                    I feel so unwanted

 

                   Please tell me that i really am here

                     Have i disappear, do you even care?

 

              What is wrong with me?

             Nobody even wanted me

 

              Its so cold out here

               rain pours down on me

 

            Tell me

                  Can you even see me?

                   Can you even hear me?

             

             If I reach out and touch you

                      could you even feel me? 

                     

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[B-poet]

Crying out even though you're feeling transparent to everyone. To become an emotional and social mirage should be everyones nightmare. This poem has great depth when dealing with anti-social behavior from the listeners standpoint. I love the literary style as well.