So go, be gone.

So go, be gone.

A Poem by darkness*star1985

Where was the time gone
it doesn't matter now

I woke up last week
a brand new me

Take names
and kicking a*s

I'm just sorry your missing it
but then again i am glad your gone

because you would just bring me down
you would hold me back.

I am not the same girl i was 2 years ago
or even 4 months ago

I am the best i am going to be
cause i am carefree

I leave my worries and fears at the door
with the f**k you in your face

I'm out having fun,
what the hell are you doing

I would be in your face
i would be dancing around
laughing and have fun

you just be sitting there
with your lips sealed

so go, be gone
i am much more happy now that your gone.

Laughing, smiling, all the thing you don't care to share with me
so go, be gone.

© 2012 darkness*star1985


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You've gotten your point across in the best way. Raw and uninhibited. I like the message though. I've moved on with my life, now I'm better than ever. So screw you old best friend or boyfriend. Keep pouring out this type of emotion because that's what truly makes all poems special in their own way. Good job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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nice way of getting the point across, i like it alot...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I absolutely love how you wrote this! Its relatable, to the point, and clearly says "f**k off" I love poems written this way. Great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've gotten your point across in the best way. Raw and uninhibited. I like the message though. I've moved on with my life, now I'm better than ever. So screw you old best friend or boyfriend. Keep pouring out this type of emotion because that's what truly makes all poems special in their own way. Good job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i hate grammar. its a waste time, its stops my thought process. if i have to i will correct later


Posted 11 Years Ago


Really like this, nice job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm not sure if you wanted people to comment on some of the grammer mistakes, but it doesn't matter. I love this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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