Emotional Gluttony

They say "Hell hath no fury on a woman scorned"... This is what happens when you screw me over...

I'll tear out

your heart.

Make you bleed.

Make you want

with incredible need.

I'll spit on

your dreams.

Make you cry.

Make you feel

dead inside.

Revenge I seek,

birthed from hurtful seeds.

Planted by men,

whom pain,

is all they need.

Love, a foreign object.

Truth, even more

abstract.

Why, you wonder,

does she hurt

this way?

Take a look

in the mirror.

Your reflection,

the key,

to the answers

of my desperate plea.

Vengence

being my vice.

Engrained by time.

Don't try to

change me.

Don't try to sway

my greed.

Your tears

will be enough.

To feed my lust

for emotional gluttony.

©2-5-2015 By Ashley Nicole Nordyke

Reviews

[Chris]

anger tends to be unreasoning... and yet its blow-up is often directed toward what would normally be just an annoyance and not the root cause of the emotional upheaval - especially when we really look into what we are really angry about... and collateral (in every personal sense) damage can't be apologized away.

[Leviathus Fortes]

I find it amazing that the people who fuel our writings are the ones who hurt us most.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I whole heartedly agree. I hate that I have to feel this way, but I love the fact that I can write like crazy when I hurt...

[RomaJ]

Wow this is amazing. Powerful piece. I have no pity for the fool who inspired this piece. Well done.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you. I don't think he even knows he inspired it. Lol

[Project Mayhem]

Powerful piece. You did well on expression

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you very much. I was just trying to give the anger I felt, and still currently feel, a body. Try to get the reader to really visualize the anger taking on form... You know?

[Gary Schooley]

Well, you sure did, in a heavy weighted manner raw harsh to the point! Ad on the; ..." I don't think he even knows he inspired it." gives it another level of reading it.

[AaronFreitas]

Very interesting piece.... I like it :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

i loved reading this poem.......beautifully written :)
keep writing......

[Cool Girl]

I know that feeling, girl. It ain't a good one..

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

No it isn't but I've learned even though it hurts like hell, it eventually does something good for me. Like turning into writing material! Thanks for the review!

[Cool Girl]

True... xD you're welcome:)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Yay! Lol. At least someone gets it..

[Cool Girl]

I'm always here to listen:)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I know, that's why I love you!!

[Cool Girl]

Luv ya too, sis!

[wordman]

well this was certainly a powerful write,and to the point

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Is that good or bad?

[wordman]

well I liked it,and I,m sure some live it

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you. As long as the reader likes it, I'm good to go...

[wordman]

that`s what it`s all about,as long as you like it

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Yeah. That is very true. thank you for taking the time to read my work and Thank you for your review!

[wordman]

you are welcome