River da best

River River u flow,
Always running never slow,
Working round da clock u never rest,
Sea water is salty u r da best.

Reviews

[Lady Glitter]

I had to review this because of the last line. I like fishing, but it must be in fresh water; lakes, streams, creeks. I can see the river flowing along, slowly or swiftly, this 4-line verse paints it clearly. I can see you standing on the bank talking to it. A friend in nature who is loved above the sea. Very nice little verse.