Treated Like Royalty!!

This is a poem/song about a boy treating me like royalty this is to all of the men/boys out there to treat your girl like royalty

I want to be treated

Like a princess, no I 

Would rather be treated

Like a queen

Treated like

Treated like

Treated like

Royalty

Life is like a Fairytale that only

Happens once (so!)

Your my fairytale

Prince and I'm your

Fairytale princess. (NO!)

You're forever my fairytale king and 

I'm forever your

Fairytale queen

Queens are remembered and

Kings are for Queens

I want to be

Treated like

Treated like 

Treated like

Royalty

Queens are strong

While princesses are 

Weak

So there forth I am

Your queen so you better

Treat me like

Treat me like

Treat me like royalty

Treated like 

Treated like 

Treated

Treated

Treated like 

   RO-AL-TY!

Author's Note

This is a poem/song that I wrote a couple of months ago and I forgot about it until I looked in a journal to see what it was and I found some songs that me and my ex best friend wrote mainly I wrote all of them (the boy never did treat me like that so were not together because he broke my heart but I'm with someone else that is a way better person than that one boy)

Reviews

[A.H.]

this is a well expressed song, kinda you can hum to it. Treated like Royalty, this should be the gold standard, nothing less. Someone who takes your heart must treat you like Royalty, otherwise what's the worth of giving your heart to someone, right? A relationship that is based on trust, respect and love is what stands through the test of times. Thanks for sharing, Ash.

[Ash]

Thank you A.H

[John the Baptist]

Nothing wrong with ambition. You might have to get on a waiting list for this one, though.

[Ash]

Sorry JTB but what do you mean, "you might have to get on a waiting list for this one, though"?

[John the Baptist]

I mean a lot of people want these things.

[Ash]

yeah that is true

[Kady R.]

Heyyy Ash!! This poem/song resonates with me. It's good to have your standards set and to go by them. I too understand what it is like to have heartbreak. But just like one person can hurt you another person can heal and it looks like you met someone like that. Hope all continues to go well!!!

[Ash]

OMG Kady you just made my day thank you so much you are so sweet

[Kady R.]

Thanks Ash!!! You're kind as well!! You're most welcome🤗🤗🤗

[John F]

Your words can be seen as a declaration of self-love and a reminder to someone of how you wish to be treated! A call for respect and understanding! A desire for a deep connection with someone who sees your worth and values your strength!

[Ash]

OMG John F thank you so much you just made my day I wrote it because I feel like an outsider so it was for my Bf until we broke up but I thought he could not make me feel like an outsider by treating my like royalty

[John F]

Better to be an outsider, Ash! Those royals are stuck in their roles, saying and doing as they are expected. Be outside of everything and you’ll be free from everything !

[Ash]

and did I say outsider I mean outcast sorry lol but thank you I have someone way better anyways he calls me a really sweet name from the song that we like and he already see's a future with me and he is very sweet he might not be talkative but once you get to know him he is pretty talkative

[John F]

There you go, you just need to reframe it. Not an outcast, but a glorious outsider! It’s those quiet ones you have to watch out for…once they get going there's no stopping ‘em!

[Ash]

lol thank you so much I've actually had a bad day at school worrying about my bf becasue he didn't feel good and he came to school anyways for me and then know I'm texting him and he's not replying so I'm freaking out

[Alice Reiht]

its actually eating girl this is awesome! wish I had a man like this.. :_3

[Ash]

Thank you but actually me and him broke up because of difficulties in how he did not treat me like a queen but now I have someone better. And as long as your being yourself you can get your one and only true love and better half

[beren]

HEY DEAR YOU DEFINITELY DESERVE SOMEONE WAAAAYY BETTER! And you will find someone much better than him!
Your lyrics actually reminded me a few songs, I don't remember their name yet but I'll let you know.
"Kings are for Queens" yes yes yes. If a man wants an angel, he should create a heaven!
Love your workss

[Ash]

Thankyou soooo much I've already found someone waaaayyyy better who I'm pretty sure we are soulmates just like the characters in my book that I introduced in the prologue: Lyle Grigori and Destiny Price

[beren]

AWWW WHAATT!?!? That's That's sweet! I'm so happy for you! I will read your book too. Wishing you all the bests!

[Ash]

thank you and Have a blessed day

[Ash]

and please feel free to let anybody you know in real life or online about my book and this poem/song

[beren]

Yes of course! Let's share this one together!

[Ash]

yeah and I really need more people's opinions on my book and this poem/song and I also want every single men/boys out there that has a girlfriend to read this