He's Being Watched

Sitting nervously in his chair

His fingers twidling a loose thread.

He couldn't move his arms

He couldn't stand up, he couldn't

The only thing he could move was his head.

He rocked it back and forth

Side to side

 

The hooded figure tood in the corner

Watching him

He couldn't see his face, but out of

The shadows his eyes glowed yellow

 

Nobody believed that he was there

Always watching

Always listening

But he was

 

The man didn't know why

The hooded figure always followed his

But he knew it wasn't good

It was evil

It frightened him

 

He tried to tell others

But they didn't believe him

They thought he was grazy

The doctors put him in this locked room

With a single light shining down over his head

They put him in this jacket

The one with no sleeves

His feet chained to the floor

 

He couldn't move

He's being watched

Author's Note

Your thoughts would be much appreciated. :)

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Good write. I have a poem called SHADOW PEOPLE which is similar to this its called SHADOW PEOPLE. I read a line in this poem that said the shadows eyes glowed yellow. That's truly weird. Did you see a shadow with glowing yellow eyes? The reason I ask is I seen a spirit years back hovering over me one day when I was a sleep I opened my eyes and there it was above me with WITH GLOWING GOLDEN EYES! I talk about it in my poem KILLER THOUGHTS. Check'em out you might lik'em.

[Asilem]

Um, no, though as much as I would've liked to, I've never had a paranormal experience. I just wrote this with nothing guiding me. Well, I've always thought that demons or Watchers ( which is what the hooded figure is) have eyes that stand out, whether they be red, blue, or yellow. The colors glow somehow...

[Asilem]

Thank you for the Review. :)

[Ana Drake]

I like it.
Is the hood figure death, waiting for him?
Creepy.. It leaves me wanting more, craving to see whats coming next.
Good write :)

[Asilem]

I don't know what he is actually.... I just know he's not good.
Thanks for the Review. :)
read moreI don't know what he is actually.... I just know he's not good.
Thanks for the Review. :)