Blue Eyes

Fictitious.

Every time I stare into those eyes,
The color of the sea, the color of the sky,
I lose my conception of time.

Every time I stare into those eyes,
Sapphire blue,
My head spins and my heart starts up.

Every time I stare into these eyes,
Sparkling like the stars,
I marvel at their perfection and beauty, jealous!

Every time I gaze into your eyes,
As cold as ice,
My confidence breaks.

Reviews

[Xanthous Crow]

This is so romantic sweet Crow, you lost yourself within her beautiful blue eyes...
I like this warmer side you show! great piece for a change :D
Very well done!

- Elisa

[Xanthous Crow]

I'm glad you enjoyed, Elisa! I liked exploring a sunnier side.... I haven't much experience in that department, unfortunately.

But you did bring it over! that's the most precious thing... you still are warm in cold winter days :) I enjoyed it very much my friend.

[Akira Kodama]

This took somewhat of an expected turn(since it is from you). I liked it. You have a certain way of ending things with a 'twist' of sorts. It goes from loving and romantic to contemptuous. Nice job.

[Xanthous Crow]

Hah! I didn't realize it while I was writing this.... the tone tends to stay the same in my head. But it is interesting to see what people pick up on and make of it! I'm glad you liked it, Indigo :)