Want

More than you can give - I want

nonexistent and unconditional love - 

I crave - day and night I daydream of you -

and long for the day when someone needs me

I've been told I fly too high - but the view is too

beautiful for me to come down - I jump around on

hollow clouds - always looking for solid ground.

Reviews

[bob, small b. aka invs]

keep flying. eventually you'll run into other people with their heads in the clouds. solid ground is over rated.

[schanzilla]

i really like that last bit there, that's enough to make anyone want to go on a soul searching world tour.

[Riptide]

Beautifully written. The short but emotional verses and your use of dashes add to the poem. You really put a lot of meaning into a short poem.