may it be one more day

maybe one day i may hold gold

maybe one day i may grow bold

maybe one day i may have none to hold

but maybe one day , is one day to old

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

What a write! Your May be is unique and interesting. As usual short and crisp and never without nice content.. I really enjoy reading your poems...
Keep penning more and keep sharing.
This "may be" can go on unending but I loved the way you kept it short.you always come with interesting pieces..
Thanks for sharing this.. :-):-):-)

[ReedWrite]

What a great little piece. So few words, and yet such a profound message.
One correction maybe, last line: is one day TOO old.
I love the message here, and the simple format. It is powerful in its simplicity. Thank you for sharing this piece.

[XO Vee]

Short and sweet but hits the point well. I love the message (that I understand) we can all hope for that one day, but one day may take too long or it might not even come. Thank you for sharing!