Embrace the World

Embrace the world 
And feel so free
Grab hold of my hand and stay with me
Embrace the world 
Here we will stay
Embrace the world 
For it was never meant to be this way

Author's Note

As always, please tell me what you think!

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Honestly, this one doesn't work for me. I don't get a sense of emotions from this one, no sadness or happiness or humor or anything. There's also no story or sense of something being told, no perspective or idea being conveyed, it's just lines of statements put together. You're other writing is really full of emotion and/or ideas, and thus a lot better than this piece.

[Austin Skye Elsborg]

Thanks for the feedback! I think I can see what you mean and where you are coming from. I'll keep that in mind next te I try to write another poem. :)