The Hate

Simple. Its not really directed to anyone, It just came out my head just like that.

What the heck am I feeling?

OMG my heart is beating

My brain is screaming

I've never had this feeling

What the heck is the meaning?

 

My hands are shaking

My heart keeps on breaking

My life keeps taking

The hurt you're making

 

Why can't you leave me alone

Its not like you have a phone

Look here I'm grown

You're grown

We're all grown

So Why can't you leave me alone?

 

We're done dude

We're done

It's not like you were any fun

You standing here makes it harder not to squeeze the trigger of this gun

Author's Note

Same here as well , I would like for anyone who reads this to be completely straight forward.

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. :) Great job! I liked the flow of this one. (:

[rnuff]

love the flow of this write and rhyme.

[JC]

ha, great ending and dig the flow.

[Shaylynn H.]

I'm always straight forward. It's not bad but the language puts me off a little bit. That's just me though, I'd like for every person to speak in perfect annunciation and proper terms. The flow is good which means a lot.