Lyric Poem

Lyric Poem

A Poem by Carmen

I keep my faith strong but it's a crime 
I ask the lord to hold me 
It’s unpredictable but at the end it’s right
Oh my God!
The town is gonna talk 
but these people do not see.
Everything is changing inside of me
I keep my faith strong please believe me
I was born confused 
Time grabbing me by the wrist 
But my faith still carries me
my faith still sets me free
Take me to church, 
Cut out all the ropes and let me fall 
I’ve been unfaithful and 
I want my dreams to rescue me 
Good riddance please don’t forget about me

© 2015 Carmen


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n1ce !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very well put together. I'd give it a full score, ten-out-of-ten, one-hundred percent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i really liked that it deep. very beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was beautiful and put together really well. I enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 12, 2015
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Carmen
Carmen

Columbus, OH



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