segregation drop

It's known in black and white,

When segregation word came to life,

But it had existed in different forms,

In all countries not for only the color type.

Men stepped on women in many ways,

They had no rights to be said.

Now is that different from what i started by to say?

segregation was never absent since our very first day.

Segregation is a mistake.

When no one understand what they are up against,

At least have the courage it takes,

to know who is that you are fighting and why.

Think of the anger you are piling up inside them,

One day they will all rise.

without warnings and in front of your eyes.

They won't lay down for anyone anymore.

They have dug their way out, there will be no return.

But nothing really wipes away,

There will be some prejudices' remains.

forever it will stay where ever you are gone,

segregation won't fade until we think as one.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Aya it is always with trepidation that i tackle such issues Not knowing your circumstances but I shall take a stab at this .For me women are the most downtrodden of the world. Set upon by men who care little about anything but their own prejudices and powers.It would seem they assume that a marriage license is also a owners manual to do to their wives as they see fit. It is a sad testament to the other half of society that they would be made to endure simply because we are stronger physically.

[Aya]

Sure i agree

[Sami Khalil]

A very good subject to write about and you did it in a great poetic form . I reject segregation myself in any form whether racial or color or gender or any form , shape or status.
Thank you for penning.

[Aya]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome .

[Sami Khalil]

Salamo Aleikum.

[Aya]

Wa A'lekum al salam ^^ !

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[DrD]

Especially racial and gender discrimination has existed since antiquity when texts sacred to some spoke of the price for a woman and the keeping of Nubian slaves. Yet, in many ways slavery comes upon us is subtle forms and we are enslaved without knowing it. You have captured the theme of discrimination very well and I could not agree more with your opinions expressed within this fine writing that I truly enjoyed reading.

[Aya]

Thank you

[J. Write]

Flowed really well from beginning to end. Strong message described in beautiful words. Thank you for sharing and reminding the world about segregation.

[Aya]

Thank you for reading

[khalid]

segregation, racial descrimination, all kind of such things which man has made facing man....i hope we can get over such things one day and we can feel each other as the same race...
very nicely penned

[Aya]

Thanks alot khalid

[khalid]

my pleasure

[dunnia]

Wow this is amazing i loved all of it from beginning to end especially the last line....this is such a great poem :)

[Aya]

thanks alot

[dunnia]

Your welcome :)