In-Depth Ideology From Within

Feeling vindicated

After catching my second wind

While appreciating the unwarranted

Bullsh*t

That’s everywhere

The atmosphere I’m existing in

Now shifts my attention

To free up my time

So I can truly find

What’s missing

On the inside of my soul

I stroll daily

Fulfilling desires

Within my reach

Vaguely

Far from feeling guilty

For being my true self

Willingly

I would rather be

Frozen physically in time

So the underlying meaning

Behind my deeds

Will have shed light upon

Their significance for being

Existent in the present

Also known as the recipient of the here and now

In regards towards a better tomorrow

That will somehow

Transpire in the midst of my fleeting shadow of misery

As daylight forever cheated me out

Of the truth that's always revealed at night

Within the stars of darkness

Since gray skies have now come about

To dismay my true plight for redemption

 

 

Reviews

[spiritwind]

A lot of thoughts here for the reader to ponder... am hour of reflection wouldn't be enough time to get the job done.

[†Tracey†]

"my true plight for redemption" seals this poem of such deeply embedded emotion..xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Within the sadness of this piece, I sense hope....there is light. You have displayed a raw and honest emotion in this write. Brilliant work!

[ms. barrie]

brilliant, simply brilliant. your choice of words and how you used them, amazing!

[AleyshaRosa]

Though sad, heartfelt. I believed every word with great clarity. Although, I did have to read the poem twice over and once out loud to understand the poem completely, but even now I don't think that I have absorbed your true meaning behind the words. There is an idea, a pain beneath that I cannot put my finger on. However, even though I don't understand, I feel it; an emotion I can't even name. Whatever the emotion, you captured it in a golden net.
Koodoos

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! amazing poem! Really great job!! :)

[David Scott]

We all seek redemption. Either from our own efforts or others... Sounds like a poet working some things out... Ha
You gave a definite feeling in the srite, but I wanted you to "say" more as in maybe your conclusions on your ideas. Still, worth the mental"taste test".
Be well.