Making Sense Out Of Chaos

It happens

With a blast

Lives are turned upside down

In a blaze

More profound than compelling

For all the estranged victims

Eye's witnessing

Chaos at its highest level

Feasting on the well-being of innocent beings

Making sense out of chaos

Remains the main rubics cube

Within the minds of unprecedented

New comers later becoming

Inhabitants of a viable and disturbed earth

Where moralities stock is worth

Mere decimal points

At an all time low

On the totem poll of mankind's

Peaceful proposal for eliminating chaos

Making life more enjoyable

For everyone who cares to carry out

A plan of action towards this immense task at hand

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i love chaos as inspiration for creative writing of all kinds...this piece was really quite well done in the comparison of chaos and peace. Its a wonderful poem to read and once again, I don't know how many times I'll end up saying this, but you are quite the master of poetry, my friend. keep at it :D

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Making sense out of chaos...that's my life every day. I quite liked this piece, it had a great beat and tempo to it. The juxtaposing ideas of chaos and peace were quite well played out here. Great word choice and phrasing as well. On a whole, well done!

[KeelyJane]

I think you have a strong theme with a powerful message in this piece. Thank you for sharing.