My first recreational pieces of literature since childhood

Below are some links to my most recent pieces of writing. I guess I'm just in a weird stage of my life and I'm looking for a community to share ideas and criticism with. What better way than writing?

The last is probably my least favorite and most controversial. While the first is my most recent..... No poe's law is not in effect

Author's Note

Any critiques at all are welcome really, or opinions either on style or the topics themselves. These where written rather quickly and one on a phone so the grammar/punctuation may be flawed.

Reviews

[Jeffery Chen]

http://the-jefferychen.tumblr.com/post/85140204459/life-is-a-rose fixed link