Weights of Many Upon My Tired Shoulders.....

Weights of Many Upon My Tired Shoulders.....

A Poem by MS. BABy
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Reality of hardships and life

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This Ache///...(gasp)

Burning that permeates ...

It radiates my muscles...

Interrupting breathing...(I am holding my breath)

Causing me Pain...

PAIN.....So interwoven///

Nothing can separate IT from ME...

 

Pretense no longer is an option

Living in Dense Dark denial

Do i see really///what has become

 

Killing me softly

Destroying what was given as

A gift...

Kindness

Compassion

Caring....Tenderness...Selflessness...Feeling...Welcoming....

 

Weighted down...

Have i become i have......Forward and backward///

Down i am weighted.....

 

Lighten me...

(echos inside of a zephyr)

No ONE!

Can remove this Pain from

me

i shall Call

 

Selah......

 

 

 

© 2011 MS. BABy


Author's Note

MS. BABy
Sometimes....this is....

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thank u so much Raven.....I am enjoying the inspiration that I am receiving from you all here

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was such a strong and powerful message. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is magical in the sense it fashions its own brand of excellence.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank u Coyote...I thought of this after Reading a passage of the Psalms that was for the infirmed incase he cannot speak....



Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful poem with a lot of emotion in your words. Easy to allow the world to weight us down. Sometime best to allow mistakes to fall away and move on. I like the ending to the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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MS. BABy

San FRANCISCO, CA



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I am just me, a poet that enjoys words and intrigue...I am inspired by others and love the musing over life...I am poetry...smile. I'm an innovator in the poetry world and am CEO of my own Production.. more..

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