Indulge Her

Indulge Her

A Poem by Blake Delisi
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This is my first real attempt at poetry. All critiques welcomed.

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Breath strained from beaten lungs
Broken trust is how our songs sung.
Stuck within sand which sinks deeper than her heart
Engulfing memories prepare to shred me apart.
Their gaze rips presence of empowered souls
An irresistible destruction until you're no longer whole.
Tell us why the world begins to freeze
When cold entangles itself into the veins of a tease.

© 2013 Blake Delisi


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Beautifully written. I love all the details packed into this.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 13, 2013
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Tags: Past, Relationships, Memories, Times

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