Friends

Friends

A Poem by VisibleLies
"

Are you willing to give your soul for a friend?

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Your eyes cloud over

The faces gone forever.

Your sences lose control

His touch forever unknown.

 

This blindness is consuming

Eating your soul away.

This deal with the devil,

Took your eyes away.

 

Did you think this through?

No, your emotions took control.

Did you know what this would do?

Or did love blind you?

 

This deal with the devil,

All so I could live once more...

© 2010 VisibleLies


Author's Note

VisibleLies
Please, tell me how this could be better? I know it sucks, but I wish to write better and I won't be able to do so until I get feedback on my writing...

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Added on March 29, 2010
Last Updated on March 29, 2010
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A Poem by VisibleLies