Touch my Body

This poem is based on Mariah Carey song Touch my body and is written from a woman's point of view...it was diffcult to write since I can only imagine. I'm setting the audience to everyoe but if you find it should be changed let me know.

 

Touch my body…

          Feathering rains eclipsed by fanning winds

                   Bring forth a harmony of seductive forces

Put me on the floor…

          Let your passion for me engulf my desire

                   As I lay on the cool but firm ground

Wrestle me around…

          Let your stern grip hold me and whirl me around

                   As my dazed glow excites my world

Play with me some more…

          Tease my willingness so I can drift into bliss

                   Fire burning so hot as my sensors are about to pop

Touch my body…

          Oh show me how to weather this storm as you crystallize my form

                   My gasping breath has finally escaped, as I anticipate

Throw me on the bed…

          Now the role has changed as I too give hold no shame

                   Yes two can play at this game as I do the same

Just want to make you feel like you never did…

          My desire for you has grown through the wake of a dark night

                   You give me the strength to grip your body with a permanent hold.

Touch my body…

The bead of sweat shimmering in the moonlight has glistened your chest and outlined your soul

                   Oh how this feeling has intensified, oh my God I’m dying

Let me wrap my thighs all around your waist...

Are you ready for me, for I am of you, as I bring you closer

I want to posses you so that I can savor this moment forever

                                    
Just a little taste...

Here I am close to you as close as I can get, kiss my lips as I will disappear

Can I handle this love of passion as I loss myself once again

 

          Touch my body…

                   Holding me so tight, driving me to delight

                             Eyes bright as I reach that heavenly flight

Know you love my curves…

          You hands explore my body like I seek your pleasure

It’s almost time to share that magnificent moment like a tickling feather

Give me what I deserve…

          My heart has reached its maximum beat with a raging shout

How wonderful this moment, as I scream “oh no don’t come out”

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Lovely write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Deborah Shepard]

so very beauitiful , each view is

dancing in the mist

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well done my friend. You write from a woman's point of view very well.

[youngwriter222]

OMG I love this. I am such a huge fan of Mariah Carey, she is amazing and so is this poem. I could dance to that song all day.

Awesome poem.