Want

something a little cheesy in my own way

WANT!

This is INSANITY!

Lost for words and clarity.

One look from you,

I fall into

The heated haze of vanity.

 

WANT!

It's getting stronger!

I don't know how much longer

My heart can take

The selfish way

My daydreams feed my hunger.

 

WANT!

It's really real now!

I wanna tell you how I feel now.

Boy, I'm just afraid of how

You'd take it; if you take it without question,

Don't mistake my 'WANT'

For 'CHILDISH OBSESSION.'

Author's Note

Shut up, Privates. x3 This is not cute! I! Am not cute! ... :3 meow.

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

:) Okay... Say something that is NoT cute...:) Well, first of all, I believe that you shouldbe tellin' this dude of your, serious feelins. :) See what happens. Ya' know? I like the poem, very well puts the feelings in the proper words. :)
And... Hisss! Yes, you actually are very cute.:) So bite me.:)

The last line is a real kicker! That hunger is well illuminated here. Nice work.

[Tasha]

I liked this a lot. I loved the ending about a childish obsession. very clever.