Ambitions

i'm purple.

My life is a rainbow.

I was born a colour.

That's all I am.

But it is every colour's ambition

To become the gold,

Or at least the gold's pot.

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Some great depth and wisdom shown with this one, love it.

[Marie Harrison]

What an uplifting poem. I love the structure and the use of color in this poem too.
Very creative!

[sugar]

the flow of this was perfect and i love the topic

[Coyote Poetry]

The color of our soul can change often. Good to find peace and calm. Become the desire color and know where you belong. I like the feel and the kind emotion of this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[TheElfPrincess]

I love how you played with the colors. The flow was great as well. Well done, a good piece of writing.

[Alicia Hirshey]

beautiful