For your eyes only

I will sacrifice my desires
I will dream forever
I shall live in my own satires
And with all my spirit,I will pray
that this is the way you are
and this is how you should stay
I will live as long as I can
For your eyes only...

And to my pen i cling
specific to your life are
my words,they mean something
fading words become harder to read
the words have to be watered down
As on the white sheet they bleed
Causing you to look closer than before
to gain meaning from these words
now even more
But listen to the heart that hides behind them
The tears that have fallen between the lines
I created this piece for you,my gem
and for your eyes only...

Author's Note

I am feeling like I have missed something here.....will surely update it later if I found whats been missed..

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Nice piece!

[MOON]

Lovely write lyrical and deep.

[Rob Santana]

fading words become harder to read tthose are awesome words right there.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

:) thanx...

[quinfinn]

i think the object of your affection should be given a presence and an identity
for this to flow and hit home as it should nice piece

[Balkaran Sidhu]

i hav pretty much got the identity...:)...though still not sure

[Sakshi]

"As on the white sheet they bleed
Causing you to look closer than before"

Love the idea of this. Wonder why I never thought of this!

Thanks for sharing an amazing piece!

Cheers!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

well exactly sometimes i feel...'why i neva thought of dat'...typical poets' thinking :D

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think it is complete...very honest and loyal words

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ya pratty much loyal... thanx :)

[Steven Cash]

very very nice

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx.. :)