The lady from the mars

From almost anything to everything......mom i salute you

With all the beauty of the skies
To whom a thousand temples would rise
your gentle,sugarcoated smiles
so very full of holy wiles.

With all the divinity of the universe
Did you came from the milky way?
tracing the orions of the space
you acquired redness of mars on your cheeks,
the glow of sun on your face.

You have floated like clouds over me
and under your april shower
your sown seed has grown up
into a nearly perfect kind of flower.

In amidst of this universe
Under your radiant charms
and in the celestial purity of your lap
I was blessed to grow up in your arms.

Oh mother,do you
bring your sweet moonbeam
from the blue heaven above
and do you send benign rain
just to soak me in droplets of love.

O goddess, from my empty soul
you have tore out all the dark matter
you kendled the light of humanity in me
the humanity that now I shall scatter...

Author's Note

I have written this for my mom...she is always having the redness on her cheeks so i call her lady from the mars,hence the title..
And she is a great mother...the best :)

Reviews

[Manpreet]

A nice piece full of love and emotions!!

[G!o]

I heard Mars needed moms so be careful lol...this is beautiful man, like totally if i was the mother, i'd be having tissues in my hands right now. I love appreciation poems and you totally rocked this off its hinges. Your poetry has really grown, sorry if i repeat that again, but comparing your recent works to what i read long ago...you've really gone up the ladder. In case you haven't shown this to your mom, you better. A wise man once told me...love them while they live...i don't know what it is like to have a mom but i am sure as heck know that this is really awesome. Great writing....

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Oh! m feelin really sorry for you after knowing that....
Sure i did showed to my mother...she absolutely loved it..
Thanx once again for the applause...m so humbled...

[Geraldine]

Aww this is just so sweet ^^ What a great great tribute for your mom. :D I so loved the metaphors that you have used that really made me imagine your mom as so lovely and great mother to you. :))

[Steven Cash]

Such a sweet tribute to your mom

Reminds me of Moving to Mars by Coldplay

[SmileBig :)]

Aww this is so sweet! Love it :)

[MOON]

Beautiful write and tribute to a loving mother.

[frivolous treasures]

Beautiful tribute to your mother. What a lovely poem, great job :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

I am sure that your Mum would be proud of you..AND this wonderful tribute.....Thanks for letting us in on it

[Marie]

Your mother must be lovely,, and deserving of this fine tribute.