The Abstraction of our Paradoxes

I am the lonely and reflecting moon

standing alone in the wilderness of night sky

You, radiant as the sun of the earth

mocking my doomed inevitability.

You in your magnanimous Noon of youth, so firm

With devotion and  holy perseverance

Me with my flamboyant addiction to a transient love

You grand and female, me pitiably masculine.

You so invulnerable inside your complacency

As am so vulnerable under accusations

Your destiny is high-born and privileged

As my fate has been a exposition of mortification.

You are so innocent and graceful

as I am irreversibly subdued

Your beauty extends itself to oblivion

My homeliness has its own little preciseness.

 

So then how can I express my emotions?

With your eyes turning away from me

You are the dream of time and glazed gold

The diamond hue of the blazing universes coherence!

Your understanding of love ,so divine

And my love,filled with hollow ardor

Your greatness of high thoughts and pure deeds

Contrasts strangely with my exercised poverty.

 

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Well penned piece with lots of emotions and pain! It has a magical start and a sad end al in all a great piece!!!

[Euro]

Very nice poem!
I liked it a lot :)
Keep it up,
-Penelope H.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

your use of binaries and comparisons works very well here I feel

[gombeggar]

as my fate has been 'an' exposition

beautifuly written and the pic adds quite a lot to it too

[Eloha]

I wonder how many truly romantic poets there are India, it is entirely possible we judge women too nicely!

[Mr.Cardigan]

i like it

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx

[Deron Alexis]

the comparison of sun and mood is a good way to show love between people who may not be each other's type very clever i would have used chalk and cheese LOL XD i'm kidding. this was well written LOL maybe the moon can finally speak to her during an eclipse or something

[Balkaran Sidhu]

haha...tht might have worked well deron...thnx for the review

[quinfinn]

i think you have discovered your niche, good sir poet. this is exquisite writing!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx quinn...this means a lot to me

[InsanityWriter]

Amazing imagery. :) Great write!! ^_^

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx :)

[Alexa Tasch]

This is lovely. It has real depth and emotion and is just really well composed. Its really sweet too. Great Write!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx alexa...m glad you found it sweet

[Alexa Tasch]

You're welcome!