The Philosophy of Our Existence

Some philosophical stuff..

We live a life of philosophical dreams

But cling to materialistic desires

for indulgence, for satisfying luxuries.

We live, by not being ourselves

We prevail through anti-thesis

We project ourselves into evolution and extinction.

But our hopes are attached

To elementary devotions,

saturated with impossibility of possession,

Implausibility of any meaningful acts.

We live with the false beliefs,

of existence, with a thirst

Like a lifetime that will always be

An antiquated, time worn reference.

We can't trace our parallel infinity

All our spirituality, it never holds

We age, midst the youth of eternity,

While striving foolishly for staying young.

We thrive for perfection in remembrance

How we couldn't see the perfection in living

with love,with adoration, with care, for humanity ,

In fighting for filling this world with allegiance.

Reviews

[junaid altaf]

life is all about the philosphies flourishing in the beings but still in the end the conclusion is common....
and that is the more complicated we make our lives the more we tend to loose the simplicity of our existence............

[Balkaran Sidhu]

wise words brother :) thanks for the review

[junaid altaf]

your
welcome

[Dayran]

A view of life's many facets presented in a disarray for the living man to put together and make sense. Just like life.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

yeah just tried to be philosophical :) thanks for the review :)

[Felicity's Eve]

I can't help but feel a logical yet mystical vibe about this... Like its so clear yet it's abstract in a great way... :)

Loved it!

100/100

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks Nora...always great to see u here :)

[Felicity's Eve]

It's my pleasure :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well it counts as well as others philosophy, a piecrcing and intriguing piece.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank u thomas....thanks for the review

[Marie]

We can't fulfill our drems by clinging to our luxuries...yet we can't seem to do without those same luxuries...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Wise words mam...thanks for the review :)

[gombeggar]

nicely done...the wording is even and the thoughts are well presented

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you Sir :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

We thrive for perfection in remembrance -- this line really got to me, because I can truly relate to it in terms of what people do (though I think that "strive" would work better than "thrive")

So true...the world has been slowly spiraling away from spirituality and indulging in the "get it now" society that is becoming ever more prevelant. We must find beauty and love in the natural world, in the people around us, not in the "luxuries" of life. Nicely done.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ya...u r perhaps right..i used thrive cos i had used strive at other places...thanks for the review :) much appreciated

[K. Louis]

"we live a life of philosophical dreams but cling to materialistic desires.." .. the fluff always seems to get in the way.

"we live by not being ourselves we prevail through anti-thesis we project ourselves into evolution and extinction" ...contradiction is that win-lose game that always comes to bite the a*s in the end.

"...midst the youth of eternity.." -- I liked that line.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you Louis...thanks for the review :)

[K. Louis]

You're welcome! :)