Never give up

Never give up

A Poem by ......

Three all stand in a straight line

The excitment and tension is building up

cheering is heard slightly in the distance

Then silence washes the whole world

no sounds just the thumping of their heasrts

everyone sits and stares

The gun sets off

the three take off like lightning

turning the turn running head to head with eachother

cheering and smashing is heard now very loudly

everything is so fast

then the 2nd greyhound pushes the 1st one

the first one falls and tumbles backward

the team that was cheering went silent

in shock and anger

But the 1st greyhound gets back up on his feet without any problem

and darts toward the  other two

the crowds are pushed away by the dramatic wind gust

back in lead head to head

they all finish the line at the same time

The cheering is all the heard

© 2012 ......


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