Life without You

To get the best effects of the poem you have to look at these pictures, "most beautiful places in the world" links. A single picture would never do in my opinion.

 Most beautiful places in the World.

"Life without You"

Life is so beautifully, wonderfully grand,

from the stars in the heavens, to the pyramids in the sands.

The mountains, valleys, rivers, and seas,

Earths breathtaking beauty, just captivates me.

As I look at the pictures, wide eyed and amazed,

my heart has been covered with a serene glaze.

While astonishing visions pair with overwhelming emotions,

I wonder if your love carries some magical potions?

For as exciting and thrilling as they make me feel,

they're nothing compared to how you make my heart squeal.

While mesmerized by their beauty and blessed by their grace,

not one single place holds a candle to the allure of your face.

The curves of your body, like waves in the seas,

your eyes hold my gaze, like the mountains hold trees.

Your touch leaves great feelings, spine-tingling sensations,

better than any other of Gods great creations.

So before that I die, one thing I must do,

Is make sure that I never, live Life without You.

-BB

 Most beautiful places in the World

Author's Note

To get the best effects of the poem you have to look at these pictures, "most beautiful places in the world" links. A single picture would never do in my opinion.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Nature is beautiful and its beauty is further enhanced by love. The colors appear brighter, the breeze softer and gentler and the lights brilliant. You bring out the divine side of love so well with the following lines:

"Your touch leaves great feelings, spine-tingling sensations,

better than any other of Gods great creations.

So before that I die, one thing I must do,

Is make sure that I never, live Life without You."


Much appreciated and enjoyed...

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you I'm happy you enjoyed it ;-)

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome :)

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

بررسی های زیبا از یک
دوست زیبا.
Is that right ?

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

دوست من شما زیبا است ، با تشکر از شما برای بررسی I think that's better, lol

[DIVYA]

What script is this please...?

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Persian I do believe.

[DIVYA]

I wish I knew Persian. Its an ancient and beautiful language.

[ANTO]

Hi B - I think this writes popularity might suffer because of the instructions at the start - but I entirely understand the concept (they are very beautiful) but imagine if you bought a newspaper say, and the banner headline was 'To see these headlines - bring this news-sheet to this location'. You'd give it back mate - wouldnt you?

Sorry for going on about it
The theme is cool, Some message couldnt be clearer - some real gems there too;
"my heart has been covered with a serene glaze."

"While astonishing visions pair with overwhelming emotions,
I wonder if your love carries some magical potions?"

the end was a good resolve with the title and completed the work nicely
thank for RR

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

You know, that's why I like you ANTO because you bloody tell it like it is. And my friend, I think your absolutely right. maybe I'll just delete all the damn instructions and leave the links in case anyone wants to see. Once again top notch reviewing, Thanks brother.

[ANTO]

thank you bro

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Beautiful poem....very well written...

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank You.

[Matching Socks]

That is so beautiful B, incredibly moving!
The pics were spectacular too! What a trip, thank you!

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thanks for looking. Glad you took the trip.

[Matching Socks]

Me too, it was wonderful. :)

[Lizardo]

This one a good one. I love how in the last stanza you add the ''Thats why i'll make sure a never live without you''
Wonderful and emotional poem
Keep up the good work!

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Thank you so much.