This World

I wish on a star
I hope with my heart
I know you are far
but I see you
inside my dreams
I dream of light
but I only see dark
I dream of you
I dream awake
to feel dirt in your fingers
sweat down your thigh
my concious is crying
my knees hit the ground
my hands clenched
my mind spun out of control
I left this world!
and it was beautiful

Reviews

[HB Rita]

Leaving world can not be beautiful dear. It's not. Living in world is beautiful.
Nice writing.

[BansheeGirl]

Maybe it is beautiful...

[HB Rita]

Wish you a happy journey