Look Away

I caught your glance. It pierced into the windows of my soul.
You saw me. The real me... raw and naked and you didn't look away.
For all the good in me and all the horrific in me. You did not look away.
You became enthralled. You and I played like children in the Wonderland called my soul...and you did not look away.
Now it is so, that you are mine. What is left of my withered heart and all of my soul. With sprinkles of sweet kisses and long embraces you made me a queen.... and then when the tears made a river of sorrow... your eyes fell out.... and you looked away.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

I get the feeling from this that the person who didn't look away never really knew pain like the speaker. Then when they either took some of the pain on, from the speaker or they experienced some personal tragedy they couldn't handle it.
Enigmatic write Barbara Borel.

[Barbara Borel]

Thanks. I have been soooo busy working 50 hrs weeks have not Been writing need to purge a little lol

[Tony Jordan]

Be careful or it'll come bursting forth all at once - like a big feel-gasm.
Youre very welcome BB.

[Barbara Borel]

Your right it's like therapy a bunchance of stuff spews out and I sometimes don't really know what it's about when I write it lol sometimes my writing has a mind of its own

[Tony Jordan]

I love that - it's like automatic writing. Do you look back and think...oh my! that must be about this, or that?

[Barbara Borel]

Sometimes. But sometimes it's it's own story. No point or plot just words

[Barbara Borel]

Sometimes. But sometimes it's it's own story. No point or plot just words

[DONNA WEBBER]

Well said ..Ouch but you knew that already, you embraced love and friendship as ownership . Stripping yourself of Independence and confidence leaving your soul vulnerable. Love yourself first then you stand tall and strong and content to be alone , alive and amazed

[Barbara Borel]

Thanks Donna yes ain't nobody that can bring me to my knees✊💟😚

[DONNA WEBBER]

Listen to your heart pick yourself up believe you have a purpose and offer your experience as hope to others

[Barbara Borel]

Thank you 💟