Yay.A limerick about an annoying teenager.

There once was a lass from OK.

who had not the sense to obey

she drove her mum mad

so her mum was quite glad

When her young irritance went away

 

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

I love limericks

As below, the last line is one syllable too long, and unfortunately, it's not particularly insightful or even that funny, as I was hoping. Still, it's not easy to write these effectively, so keep trying.

[PhantomDancer]

Neat writing! I think it might help the meter if you changed the last line to "When her young irritance went away" rather than "did go" which is one syllable too long. Great work!