To The Moon and Back

To The Moon and Back

A Story by BarrageOTM
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Bittersweet love.

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A journey that's much more than it seems to me. Still it's persevered through time and other things. Too bittersweet to let go, but each time I hold it close, it bites back. Leaving marks that scar my soul. But still not enough to let go. Though I've made the trip a thousand times over, my hands still shake as I come closer. How time slows and grows into a beautiful collage through your eyes. Never ceasing to amaze. So yes, it's a long journey, but I love it, and I'll make it a hundred more times with you.

© 2014 BarrageOTM


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This was so great. I loved every word of it. A suggestion is to make the lines staggered to it makes more sense and a few grammatical things, but those are really easy to fix. I love it. It's amazing. Keep going if you want to add anything, but it's terrific. Great job.

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This was so great. I loved every word of it. A suggestion is to make the lines staggered to it makes more sense and a few grammatical things, but those are really easy to fix. I love it. It's amazing. Keep going if you want to add anything, but it's terrific. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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