I am your father son

this poem i wrote about a father that never cares for his son's choices....but he is NOTlike my father at all :D:D

I am your father son

wait a moment i'm almost done

now come, come on my son

tell me what's wrong

i can help u i'm strong

i'm your father i'm the one

i'm your destiny i'm your shinning sun

 

you can't live without me son

so show me respect and love

show me your smile and hug

because i'm your father son

 

i can hear you any time

but your future is mine

i forbid your fun

you're mine until i'm gone

now u must be afraid from me

and u would better be

 

but i'm your father son

so show me respect and love

show me your smile snd hug

because i am your father son

 

don't be afraid my dear

i'm here in life to interfere

my duty is putting limits

and making of u nerd or a timid

thaht's what i've learned from my father

i'm the right and don't bather

 

but i'm still your father son

so show me respect and love

show me your smile snd hug

because i'm your father son

 

you know i can't be a friend

i'm making a man in the end

obeying me is your only way

until your last day

until you grow up and have your son

to do with him like what i've done

 

i sacrificed for u my son

so show me respect and love

show me your smile and hug

because i am your father son

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

hey readers !!.......this poem doesn't match with my fathers at all...i wish u enjoyed the poem :D:D

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Hmmm....
It was very deep and thoughtful!
The plot is very appealing and interesting.
The way you have written the piece is both very mature and thoughtful.
A great piece of writing.

[TrashedRomance]

Very impressive man, Using vice-versa to portray what your dad is like is more than impressive.

A++ on your english exam lol xD (Y)

[Tarekrahil]

heyyyyyyyy........i love it bassem.....u're a great creative mind..besides u've a great english usage.........love it begad...good luck....write more plzzzzz