Paul

Paul

A Poem by Baxteriniator

Your death was unbearable
Me and mom didn't want to believe
We would wait for you to come home
And you never showed up
The sadness caused aganizing pain

The room was filled with females
The crying sound was all you heard
Looking at you caused a water flow of tears
Mom and I weren't ready for this
I didn't even want to show up

Putting you in the wall was unbearable
Mom cried her eyes out setting you in
I just hid my tears away
I didn't want to cry any longer
You're sealed up and now I believe

Holidays are different without you here
We all still think about you everyday
I still cry at the thought of losing you
I hope to see you again in heaven
I close my eyes and hide the tears and pain

© 2009 Baxteriniator


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good job.
i like the flow in it.
it made me tear up.
very good at presenting the emotion behind the words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sad poem, nice flow though.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 30, 2009