The Walls

I hide behind the walls.
I see behind from the walls.
I feel safe behind  the walls.
I hold my self on to the walls.

The walls around my self.
The walls around my heart.
The walls around my head.
The walls around my feelings.
The walls blocks your emotions.

The walls blocks your feelings for me.
The walls blocks your love for me.
The walls blocks your tears for me.
The walls blocks your voice for me.

The walls block my vision to the world.
The walls block my voice to the outside.
The walls block the sunlight on my tainted skin.
The walls block my love for someone.
The walls block my thoughts.

One day i hope you break the walls down around me.
One day i hope you break the walls down around my heart.
One day i hope to see you and to kiss you.
You are my everything.

Reviews

[The Spirit Chaser]

I love the emotion your poems are charged with. Happiness, excitement, and hope are beautiful, but pain, loneliness, and sorrow are the best motivators, especially when it comes to art... I wonder why that is? Just keep pouring your feelings into the poems. That's what makes poetry so beautiful.

[DeathHaze]

Hi there :)
My mind is sometimes busy with love,life and death and i write my thoughts down on here.
Thanks for your review and keep writing..

[poetandIknowit]

I love how you kept repeating "The Walls." The usage of repetition is really well done. This is a well written poem, all in all, as it conveys a strong meaning and is hopeful.