Under observation

You can hear the sound,

Stop and call

Our thoughts,

They are so large that it overwhelmed

Watch your feet

Bird calls,

You step back,

Always another day

Reviews

[Colin]

I was a bit confused by this at first, considering how indirect and short it is, but after reading it a few more times I've decided I liked it. Interesting writing style and way with words.

[Davey-sama]

Thank you very much :3