Word Flow/

Word Flow/

A Poem by Beatrice Mars
"

Frustration.

"

Word flow/

 

(I'll) F**k off then.

 

***

 

You know me

Better than that -

 

(I'll) Stick around then,

'Umming' and 'Arring,'

Just to piss (you)

Off - Or rather,

Because I

Wish I had some

Emotional investment in

Something -

You know - So as to

Have something to write about.  

© 2011 Beatrice Mars


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It's humorous, I keep looking back at the brick wall, pretending that these words fit in between the crevices. But, I understand now(: It's also kinda contradicting, considering you're writing about not being able to write. Haha, I guess that's the way a real writer does it. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ha ha ha
Very good I could snap a pencil Grrrrrrrrr

Posted 12 Years Ago


Writer's block?

Posted 12 Years Ago


ahaha soo true - i love this! the last few lines made me laugh despite the tone being all... frustrated and whatnot... xx

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

United Kingdom



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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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