Understand Me

None of you get it...

I do not wish to be here.

I never asked for this life.

I never asked to have a broken mindset.

I never wanted to be a shut-in in my own room.

I never felt like I belonged.

If you keep trying to give me advice,

At what point will you break me?

There has always been that part of me,

Darker than the lightness within me.

That lightness is like a fading candle,

On it's last breathe.

What more can I tell you?

I'm a girl with a broken heart,

A girl with a lost soul.

A girl who can no longer say what is really wrong.

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

I sense a deep withdrawn personality holding the hurt inside which induces fear from love,life,and trust.Hope is always there but you have to let go and become confident in yourself.I can relate to this poem from past experience,we learn to move on and try to avoid taking this baggage into the next relationship.Might I suggest you listen to "No more cloudy days" performed by the Eagles

[Becca]

Thank you for the review and for your wonderful insight. I think I heard that song before though, might look it up again though. Thank you

[W R Stowe]

Your quite welcome