Evermore

Somewhere a gentle whisper,
makes its way to a love's lost,
Igniting to and fro,
Never fathoming the cost,
A shared thought escapes their lust,
A seed of forever,
An uncomplicated, 
Unpredictable coaster ride.
No one utters in protest,
For when one is honest,
There is no need to hide,
Two halves combined
Make a whole,
Flooding encouragement,
And unfaltering attachments,
Work together everlasting,
Evermore!!!!

Reviews

[Carolynn]

I like the part about it being uncomplicated because true love is just that, mutual trust and respect - this was really enjoyable to read :)

[Mila]

Very nicely done :) read it a few times through before popping down a review. You have a really amazing way with using few words to explain a bigger picture. Keep smiling and writing, well done! :)

[Rebecca Leigh]

Thank you so much for your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

[BennyBooth]

oh, this reminds me of some of my writing...you took me away... wonderful!

[Rebecca Leigh]

Thank you, when I read some of your poems, I knew I had to share this one with you:)

[BennyBooth]

I am so glad you did. Thank you... :)

[Rebecca Leigh]

You're welcome