I turn my music up so loud I can't think.

This is a song I wrote at a park after me and my mother got in a fight.

Verse One:
I start my bike up
Can't stop myself from crying 
I feel nostalgic as I drive
Who can blame me for trying?

Chorus:
My music's so loud I can't think
I Drive past the quiet small towns
my music and I are in sync
I'm starting to feel better 

Verse Two:
Driving farther away from the lies
Am I crazy for feeling so blue?
I close my eyes and let go
I know i'll make it through


Chorus:
My music's so loud I can't think
I Drive past the quiet small towns
my music and I are in sync
I'm starting to feel better 

Author's Note

It needs work, but I can't figure out what needs to fix so tell me please😴

Reviews

[Abby]

It's pretty good, you can almost feel the pain in your voice as the song goes on.
My one criticism is try singing this to a beat of a song and adjust the chorus a little. At the moment it has a cheesy-poem type feel, which for a song, is the opposite direction of what you want to be going in.
For a first draft though, A star. Well done.

[Mayue Naoya]

Thank You I really appreciate your comment!!

[casablancavic]

I think it's very short and there's not enough story to it

[Mayue Naoya]

I thought so too Thank-you for that!