My Heart

My Heart

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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I served my heart
Upon a silver platter
With a drizzling of Lust
A sprinkling of Desire
A dash of Need
A pinch of Want


It is for you, my dear, to take.

© 2010 Bella-Marie


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Bella-Marie
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at first, the poem (or i may call it a spell) seems to curse the lover. however, it impresses upon the latter as something to serve as a potion which is only palpable by the sensations of the heart itself, but not by the tongue. it finishes with a mystical line to allure the reader. sufficiently and curtly put indeed, though i'd like to read more of it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


short and sensual...seems to be the perfect recipe for an enjoyable read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it!! Short. Sweet. To the luscious point! Nice job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hahaha. Beautiful short sweet and enjoyable. I love the way you've written in about being served and making it sound a bit like a recipe.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 29, 2010
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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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