Sentimental Heartbeats

Don't take this too literal.

My sentimental heart
beats without rhythm,
lacking rhyme.
Typing to you a message;
listen closer, take your sentimental time.

My sentimental heartbeats
taking their due;
fighting tall against your
heathen air, I and just a sentimental few.

My sentimental beats,
thumping in this
sentimental chest
silently screaming without sentimental rest.

Our sentimental heartbeats
beating one in all the same,
telling sentimental stories;
to be buried with our sentimental names.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar, it's poetry.

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