Unloveable

The Unlovable


Once upon a time there was a girl, but this was no ordinary girl. This girl was nothing like the other girls, she wasn�t that pretty or smart but she had something none of them had. She had an amazing personality and eyes you could get lost in. She could look in your eyes and knew eveything about you, she could give you this look that would make it so you could never forget her. The problem was the girl had many deep dark secrets. And one of them she could never ever be loved. Know matter what she did no one could love her. Not because of what she was doing but because of a curse put on her when at birth. Only a man who could over come the selfishness of all man could break the curse and fall in love with her. But it didn�t seem possible, not because their weren�t unselfish people but no one could be more unselfish than all of the selfish people. The only way was to make everyone in the world unselfish, but in doing that would be a selfish act. It was just a big loop hole. The girl looked for every way to over come this and find a way to be loved, she wanted nothing more than to be loved. She finely gave up and decided to just live life with what she could do and not worry about the impossible. Until she met a boy, but not just any boy this boy had something different about him. The girl got to know the boy, and relized something, she needed this boy, he was her other half. She loved everything about him. But deep inside she knew the boy could never love her. She decided she could not live because it hurt, loving him so much and knowing he could never love her. That night she wrote on a piece of paper �I love him, but I know he can�t return the feelings.� Then she took a drink of poision, then lied in her bed, and awaited her death. She soon drifted off into sleep and died. 3 days later was her funeral, hundreds of sobing people showed up. But none as upset about her death then the boy. The girl didn�t know even though she was never supost to be love, she made a difference in everyones she had met, life. And that day something magical happened. The boy found the paper and at that very moment he finished reading it, he new what he had to do. He ran to the girls grave and wrote something on it, then stabbed himself in the heart. The grave said �I may not love you, but I cant live without you.� The boy had comit the least selfish act of all. He did not understand how he cared so much for someone and didn�t love them, but he did know he could not live with her. By giving his life he broke the curse and the boy and girl forever loved each other.

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

Great story and so sad. A lot of misspelled words, which made it hard to read at times. A very wonderful tale, great job.