What is Hurt?

What is Hurt?

A Poem by Bethsinitaly

What is hurt?
Hurt is a black ocean swell - that rises within - up and up -
before crashing down upon the paper boat that holds my fragile soul
afloat in this endless sea of relentless tempests.
It is the sad reality of a tentative dream -
born once in innocence - then - smashed - and smashed again -
Laid bare to the bright glare of day -
until all that was - is left -shattered and unrecognizable. 
It is the all too familiar loss of the precious care worn picture held close -
against my trembling heart. 
The back of a head - as - one by one - They turn -
Leaving me to the dark confines of my own despair.
Hurt is the darkness hidden in even the bluest skies -
the cold flicker inside the burning flame.
It is the endless procession of shattered pedestals too broken to mend -
which line the long forgotten paths of memory -
sad fallen soldiers sacrificed on the pitiless blade of cruel unfeeling hope -
crumbling to dust in the wake of my weary amaranthine footsteps.  

© 2016 Bethsinitaly


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I really like your imagery. Even in the brightest moments there is still darkness within and you captured it quite well. There are some great lines here and the last two I liked the most! Well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Bethsinitaly

7 Years Ago

Thanks I appreciate you taking the time to read my work. I agree I try to live my daily life in the .. read more
duff

7 Years Ago

I absolutely agree!

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Bethsinitaly
Bethsinitaly

Teramo, Abruzzo, Italy



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